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Liz Martin
May. 3, 2012 4:48 pm, Updated: Aug. 15, 2021 8:40 am
My phone chimed Tuesday night with a text message from my mom. "You were on Jay Leno Monday night!" My stomach sank, immediately wondering what photo of mine had ended up on Leno's Headlines segment, but pretty sure I knew exactly what I would see. (It's the first headline shown from that link.)
Ohhh, of course. I had been working on a story about the political climate at universities, specifically the University of Iowa. I had already photographed the College Republicans' Conservative Coming Out Week "animal rights" cookout for this story the week before I went to cover a protest related to accused hiring discrimination.
There was only one student at the protest, so I shot with the context of the university in mind -- to visually tie the protest with the Pentacrest. While the two photos were fine for daily coverage, the content of the signs didn't add anything to the photos. (And, you'll notice a misspelling on the second photo. "Outnumbed" in place of "outnumbered." We eliminated that photo from consideration for the story partially due to that misspelling.)
And then I saw the sign. Now, as a general rule, when covering protests we avoid photos that rely heavily on signs. But this was an exception: it expressed the sentiment of some of the subjects in the story, the posture was strong and the campus buildings in the background were easily recognized. Basically, it had impact, leading us to make the unconventional choice to use it to lead the story. It wasn't until some online comments pointed out the "aways" error that I even noticed. The mistake got past me (as you can tell from my caption), my photo editor and presumably at least one or two copy editors on its way to publication, so I at least take some solace in not being the only one to see "always" in "aways."
To give balance to the visual report for the story, I also photographed an Obama rally and followed some students as they went out canvassing. In the end, we had far too many photos to choose from for this Sunday centerpiece, but that's a good problem to have.
University of Iowa sophomore Lauren Benkoski of Crystal Lake, Ill., (from left), College Republicans President Kelsey Boehm, a junior from Peoria, Ill., senior Peter Larson of Dubuque and freshman Quentin Marquez of Glenwood cook burgers and hot dogs during an 'animal rights' cookout at College Green Park as part of Conservative Coming Out Week on Thursday, April 5, 2012, in Iowa City. (Liz Martin/The Gazette-KCRG)
Students walk past as Rich Clinite of Coralville holds a sign calling for a cut of law school funding in a protest against discrimination in hiring practices at the University of Iowa on Monday, April 9, 2012, in Iowa City. The protesters hoped to bring attention to a lawsuit against the university for discrimination against conservatives in hiring. (Liz Martin/The Gazette-KCRG)
Students walk past a protest against discrimination in hiring practices at the University of Iowa on Monday, April 9, 2012, in Iowa City. (Liz Martin/The Gazette-KCRG)
A sign reading “Right isn't always wrong!” is held up during a protest against discrimination in hiring practices at the University of Iowa on Monday, April 9, 2012, in Iowa City. The protesters hoped to bring attention to a lawsuit against the university for discrimination against conservatives in hiring. (Liz Martin/The Gazette-KCRG)
Students listen to a speaker during the Greater Together Obama For America Iowa Youth Summit at the Downtown Sheraton Hotel on Tuesday, April 10, 2012, in Iowa City. (Liz Martin/The Gazette-KCRG)
Chair of the Iowa Democratic Party Sue Dvorsky (right) leaves the stage after speaking to students about the upcoming elections during the Greater Together Obama For America Iowa Youth Summit at the Downtown Sheraton Hotel on Tuesday, April 10, 2012, in Iowa City. (Liz Martin/The Gazette-KCRG)
Liz Zaretsky, a University of Iowa sophomore from Buffalo Grove, Ill., majoring in English and political science (center) who is a fellow with the Obama For America reelection campaign, and UI junior political science major James Adams of Lake Mills (right) talk with Tanner McCutcheon, a UI junior from Bettendorf, while he signs a commitment card to vote for Obama in the upcoming election as Zaretsky and Adams canvass neighborhoods near campus as part of the Greater Together Obama For America Iowa Youth Summit on Tuesday, April 10, 2012, in Iowa City. (Liz Martin/The Gazette-KCRG)